'brilliant and layered with emotional nuance' If these are the reviewer's words, you should quote directly.'Cork continued to observe that' Too prosaic.'a welcome view' I assume you don't mean that his view was welcome? You mean to say that he welcomed the features?.'Partnering with Limited Run Games, Campo Santo will distribute under ten thousand physical copies of the game on PlayStation 4 sometime in 2016.' This will be out of date very soon.'while maintaining his stylized, elemental artistic vision' This doesn't come across as very neutral.Described by The Hollywood Reporter as 'the singular, iconographic image that is the foundation upon which a movie's marketing campaign is built'. 'Delilah reports someone in Henry's tower, who finds a Walkman with incriminating conversations of them plotting to destroy the compound.' I'm struggling with this it's not clear who the who or the them refer to. Josh Milburn ( talk) 00:25, 28 November 2016 (UTC) Got to dash, sorry- didn't have as long as I thought. The plot section suggests that there is a collectibles system this should be mentioned in the gameplay section if so.'Delilah lied about Brian's presence because of employee rules, but both disappeared without a trace.' I read this to mean that Delilah lied to Henry to preserve Ned's privacy, but I'm guessing that what is meant is that Delilah lied to higher-ups because Brian wasn't allowed to live with Ned? This could do with being cleared up.'Henry finds a Walkman with incriminating conversations of them plotting to destroy the camp' Who does the 'them' refer to, here?.' The game also features a day-night cycle, but will progress if players successfully complete all the relative set objectives' I'm not sure what the two parts of the sentence have to do with each other?.' Xbox One version was released in September of that year, which included an audio tour and free roam mode, also for its PlayStation 4 Pro port and Steam.' You lose me at 'also'.'After the basis from a single painting by Moss, Ng adapted' Grammatically odd.

Olly Moss was credited with Visual Direction and Sean Vanaman with Creative Direction.

What does 'directed' mean in the context of video game development?.It is to stress the nature of conspiracy present in the story. 'conspired mystery' is a striking term it's not immediately obvious to me what you mean by it.Should the date of release not be in the first sentence? Platforms?.Josh Milburn ( talk) 00:05, 28 November 2016 (UTC)

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